All These Things I See In You

Actually not a poem but a song I wrote for a friend....

All these things I see in you
Everything I see is true
You try to wanna be
Something different that you see

I just wonder if you knew
All these things I see in you

I can’t help the way I feel
You make it all so real
The smile you portrayed
Can make it matter anyway

I just wonder if you knew
All these things I see in you

I can’t explain these feeling inside
I never been able to say how I feel
I can explain although I wanted to try
Its just the way I feel and I dunno the reason why..

All these things I see in you
Everything I see is true
You try to wanna be
Something different that you see

I just wonder if you knew
All these things I see in you

[GUITAR SOLO]

All things I see in you
Everything I see is true
The smile you portrayed
Can make it better any day

I just wonder if you knew

All these things I see in you

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

Nice song. To me it's kind of a song that is both about love but it could seem like you want someone to be themselves.

It really feels like a great song. Do you sing or play as well? Let me know because if you try hard enough I'm sure have a very bright future. Great work :)

[Bohrium Guy]

I am a musician and its already been recorded in raw form. Thanks for your kind review.

read moreI am a musician and its already been recorded in raw form. Thanks for your kind review.

~Rob~

[Bohrium Guy]

Damn I have no idea why its saying read more when I am signing it ~Rob~

[Alucard6336]

I saw that too lol

[Bohrium Guy]

Well exclude the read more that is your option, but honestly I did a return and signed ~Rob~ twice even and the same thing occurred.....subliminal messages?

[Sarah]

This song is truly touching. This is beautiful and its the only things I can say without choking up in all honesty. Just beautiful