Dancing With A Rose

I remember all so well her dancing with a Rose

Lips softy holding the stem to strike a cute pose

Smiling brightly with eyes of tender loving care

Flowing mental images of great things to share

Feeling deep within my heart that illuminating glow

The two of us would find a place to let it safely show

She is happy and her heart well in loves caressing fire

He is matching with flame of loves strongest desire

So short a time only just a months well set

Its truth and reality love is a sure things bet

No denying the feelings are being laid out

Both carrying the torch with very little doubt

Soon again to be together sharing what they have learned

Allowing loves passion and romance so brightly churned

For this is how two people become with a foundation

Sharing love between them as love is God best creation

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and amazing poetry.
"She is happy and her heart well in loves caressing fire
He is matching with flame of loves strongest desire"
The above lines were my favorite and the complete poem was outstanding.
Coyote

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks Brother I really appreciate your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[maria ( rose)]

Beautiful! Absolutely Beautiful ,Each stanza sets the tone with the right ingredients.
from the rhyme scheme to unconditional Love ...amazing work. I really adore those last 2 lines..
For this is how two people become with a foundation
Sharing love between them as love is God best creation.

Dancing With A Rose -- 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟5 glowing stars..great job!

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you so much for the nice review...