Actions of Love

From the "Stupid Cupid" series.... You all should remember. :)

Love is a combination of two hearts

Feelings shared actions setting marks

An equal feeling that shows ones care

Make sure the other is always aware

You can’t ask someone to love you

They have to feel they already do

You can’t tell them to call each day

What would this really suggest or say

You can’t be the sole wisher of meets

Hide feelings that you feel his deceits

If love is really there and felt it’s true

He will be longing to be with you

If he feels in his heart he will call

If his hearts saying you’re his all

If he wants to be closer to you

He will find a way to make ado

If this love is real he will show it

Send you love cards to bestow it

Little things are from both sides

Making the best of the love rides

If this is not the case you feel

Then he is out for sex to steal

You fill a void and are his toy

Await the next heartless ploy

Love is sharing feelings very well installed

Taking time to keep each other enthralled

Being close and wanting more each day

For love keeps two at passions great bay

If this can’t be felt or well seen

You’re living a hopeless dream

Time to find a new avenue

Say goodbye and let it be thru…

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

Impressive and wise, to say the least. like the old saying goes ''ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS'':
I'm just in ''awe'' at the way you write, it blows my mind. from the visuals, to the rhyme schemes & on and on ..sometimes I'm lost for words ..you have the craft! great job..love what I am reading so far.keep it up! and I will get back to your question you had asked me ...

[Bohrium Guy]

My mind drifted playfully to the Bahamas and beach no wait that wasn't you or...Oh nevermind. Thanks again for the review.

[maria ( rose)]

LOL............................................ ! love the sense of humor,
my pleasure!!

[Bohrium Guy]

Makes life more livable being crazy then being uptight.....

[Daydreaming]

Wow, you can really read this and in your head picture how it feels. Very well written, thank you for such a wonderful read.

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you for your nice review!