Thanksgiving Poem

Something I wrote in the past... Enjoy!

A time for a feast, a family united
Giving Thanks for food undivided
For interaction with love and time
Together we're sharing in the rhyme

A time we thank our Lord above
For provisions given out of love
That our health we can provide
And our families done in pride

That moment of prayer in need
For all the blessing all in deed
Remember its not just a Holiday
Its being thankful and whom we pray

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Your holy mastery is complete... it is a distinct pleasure to read and review your work.

[Bohrium Guy]

Hey now.... I am still studying walking on water. However thank you for the awesome review!!!!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hahaha You're so funny, thank you.

[Bohrium Guy]

Oh you have no idea....

[maria ( rose)]

Beautifully Written: This would be perfect for my Groups Thanksgiving Contest you should enter it.

[Bohrium Guy]

I think I will :)

[maria ( rose)]

Great !! :)

[Sarah]

those who have such pleasures to have those that they pray together are lucky... for those like me its only me and empty seats.. but this does put things into perspective. beautiful as always

[Valentine]

Very nice write. You rhyme your lines so well...I sometimes write more with my own feelings even if all lines do not match like yours. Well done. Valentine