End of Time

When all you see is darkness fall...

Darkness falls I await the end of time

Take me now I am well past the prime

I've tasted what should have been past

I couldn't hold on nor make it last

Sorrow breaks each day I come awake

Alone and cold there is nothing I forsake

Pain from lessons haunting black sheep

No rest for me not even any long sleep

Just faded memories kept deep inside

Past words received and I almost died

Foolish haunts driving me to insanity

Each passing I scream in profanity

Now the prayer just take me below

Nothing here and nothing to show

Misguided people playing the games

While I sit wishing to burn up in flames

Author's Note

It's in the raw, don't expect punctuation and grammar to be spot on.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

what a difference from your last poem..this one flows with pain and darkness. Leaves me with a lump in my throat. sad.because lots of people are fighting similar battles.depression is like a wrecking ball .
But it doesn't have to take over one's life with the help of others. ''Light is always brighter than darkness''.
maria

[Sarah]

this, is how i feel right now. all the pain numb and you just wanna hide and disappear... this is beautiful well done

[Valentine]

Wanted to test the waters of your writing. A very deep but sad write. Valentine

[Bohrium Guy]

Oh you have tested the water for many years... you know my style isn't all about darkness... LOL

[PHFASCES]

Touching and raw. I'm curios, do you zone out and just write and leave pure and untouched or do you take your time and edit your poems after reading it over and over?

[Bohrium Guy]

In all honesty, I play a game somewhere else on the social media end where someone throws out a word and I try to through how I feel or put emotions to the effect. I like raw and untouched posts because somehow to me going back threw to please the grammar kings and queens doesn't appeal to me much. My words need to come to the right people that know how to feel what they read not study for errors and b***h.... :)

[PHFASCES]

Dude. we are alike on that tip. but i write from random topics or tunes i hear and let that flow out. sometimes i freestyle but forget to write it down. haha. Glad to have come across you.

[Bohrium Guy]

likewise my friend....