And I had been waiting a long, long time

And I had been waiting a long, long time

A Poem by Carmen L.

I opened the window just to feel your chill

And just about the time the Shadows called

I saw you, creeping up the hill

And I had been waiting a long, long time

 

I opened my heart just to feel your cold

And just as I had accepted your terms

I saw you, strolling up the street

And I had been waiting a long, long time

 

I opened my mind just to understand your pain

And just then you would not let me try

I saw you, running up the way

And I had been waiting a long, long time

 

I opened the window just to feel your breeze

And just when I thought you would not show

I saw you, sink up my Sun

And I had been waiting a long, long time

 

I opened the door just to bring your pain

And just as I touched the frame

I saw you, shadowing my eyes

And I had been waiting a long, long time

 

I opened my eyes to your just splendour

And just then I knew what would happen

I saw you, you saw me

Because

I had been waiting a long, long time

© 2011 Carmen L.


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I can feel the emotion in this and my favorite stanza is the last one

Posted 13 Years Ago


Emotions in this really tug and make me think somewhat of my past. Love the last stanza. This is wonderful....xo

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2011
Last Updated on August 19, 2011
Tags: heart, love, time, wait

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Carmen L.
Carmen L.

Cape Town, South Africa



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Sometimes words cannot describe how I feel. Love, hate and fear all jumbled in one. But when I can put my feelings into words, I do. I am not an accomplished writer and good pieces are few and fa.. more..

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