Goodbye, sweet Toyota

Goodbye, sweet Toyota

A Poem by Bobisnotmyuncle

It bellows and howls, rocking back and forth.
 It does not know who or what is the cause. 
It only knows that it is in pain. 
 A pain it remembers no doubt.
It remembers a time of joy and fondness for life.
The asphalt it trekked upon was a good surface to employ its powers. 
 It did this well too.
 Things change; they break and wither into dusts.
Its heart has been penetrated too deeply to heal, and it knows this.
 A new life may be in store.
It's hissing and grinding is all too obvious.


Goodbye, sweet Toyota.

© 2024 Bobisnotmyuncle


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interesting read Bob. a grand theme. One small thought? Have or did you consider personalizing the "it" to a he/she/they pronoun to give the poem a tighter sense of loss?

ken

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bobisnotmyuncle

7 Months Ago

You are so very right! Thank you for the constructive criticism.

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