Farewell

What a fool i must have been
To think ide have a chance in the end
The way you go is insufferably breaking
Leaving me with nothing but aching

If love makes one do this why bother
When all that rewards is pain and suffer
Here i am feeling so alone
And all i wanted was to give you a home

Im trapped in this self pitty
When even i know it wasnt me
It was your unwillingness to try
Even i could see that in your eyes

I should have known better
I knew we we'd never be together
But something forced me to try
Hoping maybe ide catch your eye

This will be the last thing I write
After this I still hope your alright
Goodluck on your endeavors
Maybe we will meet in our next life

Reviews

[Curtis.Lenker]

Wow such a raw powerful way to say goodbye to someone. This reminds me of my one ex girlfriend. I did everything for her and her kid. Worked 12 hour shifts, got a new house and she was homeless and I took her in clothes, toys, and everything for her kid and she didn't appreciate it. Ended up cheating on the best thing she could have ever hoped for...and blamed everything on me. Thanks for sharing. Great work here.
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[Hopefull]

I appreciate your kind words. Seems we both have been through some stuff

[CLR9]

He just wanted some kitty kitty meow meow. It sucks.

[Hopefull]

I’m a dude.....