Freedom

This machine trapped beneath me,
Is the potential of my destiny.
With its frightening ability of release,
It never ceases to please.

Be it hot or cold,
It always fills the mold.
With the twist of a wrist,
The mind is filled with bliss.

An activity so arduous,
Mind locked in total focus.
The adrenaline i seek,
Aspiring to return on my feet.

Cutting through the wind,
I cant even begin.
A lifeless machine,
Makes everything keen.

If this thing kills me,
Know that i was free.

Reviews

[Audie G. Couch]

Right on. This illustrate just how deep of a connection a man can have with a motorcycle....or woman, and why.
Nicely done.

[Hopefull]

I never even thought about the connection to a woman. But it definitely works.

[Audie G. Couch]

For sure. I thought it worked too. =-)

[light and ashes]

" If this thing kills me know that I was free." I love that line.

[Hopefull]

felt like it was the perfect end to this one. thanks for taking the time to read and review.

[light and ashes]

You're welcome :)

[olla]

yep.. there is no feeling like it.. I got a dog so my bike is parked most of the time.. but I still recognize that feeling.. it's a good thing..

[Hopefull]

Hard to feel unless your going a hundred and five

[olla]

perhaps.. but I like a little more metal around me for such daring.. I had a boy friend years ago that took me for a ride and terrified me.. it took me a long time and a understanding biker friend to over come it.. but I still love the freedom and the wind in my face and the heightened awareness.. the texture.. of the atmosphere around me.. your poem brought it all back even without the advanced speed..

[Samuel Dickens]

This is all great stuff, though after 61 years of riding, I'm glad I ain't dead yet so I can up tomorrow and ride again. Ride safely, my friend.

[Hopefull]

Thank you for the kind worrds. The objective is to always return home. Some of just aren't as lucky as others. Stay safe out on those roads to freedom friend.

[Serendipity Planet]

I understand the feeling
thought the danger too
Good writing

[Hopefull]

i had a lot of fun writing this one actually. was a long day in the saddle that brought it to mind.

[Hopefull]

forgot to say thanks lol