Freedom

Freedom

A Poem by Hopefull

This machine trapped beneath me,
Is the potential of my destiny.
With its frightening ability of release,
It never ceases to please.

Be it hot or cold,
It always fills the mold.
With the twist of a wrist,
The mind is filled with bliss.

An activity so arduous,
Mind locked in total focus.
The adrenaline i seek,
Aspiring to return on my feet.

Cutting through the wind,
I cant even begin.
A lifeless machine,
Makes everything keen.

If this thing kills me,
Know that i was free.

© 2020 Hopefull


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Right on. This illustrate just how deep of a connection a man can have with a motorcycle....or woman, and why.
Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hopefull

3 Years Ago

I never even thought about the connection to a woman. But it definitely works.
Audie G. Couch

3 Years Ago

For sure. I thought it worked too. =-)
" If this thing kills me know that I was free." I love that line.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hopefull

4 Years Ago

felt like it was the perfect end to this one. thanks for taking the time to read and review.
light and ashes

4 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
yep.. there is no feeling like it.. I got a dog so my bike is parked most of the time.. but I still recognize that feeling.. it's a good thing..

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hopefull

3 Years Ago

Hard to feel unless your going a hundred and five
olla

3 Years Ago

perhaps.. but I like a little more metal around me for such daring.. I had a boy friend years ago th.. read more
This is all great stuff, though after 61 years of riding, I'm glad I ain't dead yet so I can up tomorrow and ride again. Ride safely, my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hopefull

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind worrds. The objective is to always return home. Some of just aren't as lucky .. read more
I understand the feeling
thought the danger too
Good writing

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hopefull

4 Years Ago

i had a lot of fun writing this one actually. was a long day in the saddle that brought it to mind.
Hopefull

4 Years Ago

forgot to say thanks lol

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