What Is Wrong With Me?

What Is Wrong With Me?

A Poem by Hopefull

As i lay here you lay in anothers embrace.
Been a while since i seen your honest face
The looks you gave to me had to be real.
If they weren't i wouldn't know how to feel.

Lost in thoughts of something not mine,
I wish i could get you off my mind.
Trapped in a torrent of wishes,
Hitting nothing but misses.

When will i find my salvation,
Feeling nothing but starvation.
Just to want to have feelings from another,
But having trouble to even bother.

What is wrong with me?

© 2020 Hopefull


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I believe the answer to your question is nothing
Its a normal thoughts and feeling which you described in a beautiful honest way

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hopefull

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm still trying to figure this writing thing out. That and my personal life i suppose.
 Serendipity Planet

4 Years Ago

You will get there, it really takes long time to heal

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