Starin' Out Into the Moonlight

 Starin out into the moonlight

Of a cold night

Where there’s no warmth

Cause there’s no light

And there’s no you

 

Tryin to find something that feels right

Somethin that’s bright

But you’re not here

It ain’t alright

Dunno what to do

 

All I know is when I’m with you

There’s nothing to do

But just relax

Kiss and hug you

And enjoy my view

 

And now that you’re gone

I’m trapped with my memories

Of you and me

The love that we have

Is better than anything

We’re happy and free

 

Still I’m sittin here alone now

No one’s home now

All the lights off

It’s gonna show now

How I feel inside

 

I can’t wait until you’re back here

I can hold you near

See you smile again

Whisper in your ear

The things you wanna hear

 

But now that you’re gone

I’m trapped with my memories

Of you and me

The love that we have

Is better than anything

We’re happy and free

 

I promise every time I see you

Will be better than the last

Because in time all things get better

Things are different from the past

 

Yet I’m starin in the moonlight

Of a cold night

Where there’s no warmth

Cause there’s no light

And there’s no you

 

And now that you’re gone

I’m trapped with my memories

Of you and me

The love that we have

Is better than anything

We’re happy and free

 

Now that you’re gone

I’m trapped with my memories

Of you and me

The love that we have

Is better than anything

We’re happy and free

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

shows despair with a glimmer of hope. at least he will be coming back. very lyrical like a song. excellent poem.

[just is]

This is so wonderful,
love the rhyme through out.
Amazing!

[Suditi]

Oh wow!
Its a beautiful write.
The emotions are so profound.

[MOON]

Good poem flows like a song.

[Liz Alexander]

This is a great poem. I love the way you simply explained your moments when your here or when your not.

[_Hanabi_]

lovely!!!!!!....this is just great...i simply love it

[Andrea]

I like the feel to this, little bit sad but still hopeful, I sense the love hasn't gone and there will be more happy memories but feeling very down at the moment because he isn't here.

[ecept]

Wow such a wonderful read, I really enjoyed this, it's wonderful.

[horsey]

hi

[HPsGurl1]

Such a sweet write, in a way ... Being trapped in memories is hard, especially if a memory is about a person you really liked ... I really liked your piece! It was simple yet classy in it's own way. You have a way of speaking things ... Good job!