Crimson Story

Write a little story with a little twist.

Write it with a razor blade upon your fragile wrist.

Said statement of 'i love you' has done no good- but harm.

And so you show your story etched across your arm.

You thought they truly loved you but you conclude it was a lie.

Feel just as a broken toy used to pass time by.

So now you sit alone at night wondering what went through your mind.

Still finding it hard to move along and leaving it all behind... 

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

so many people misunderstand: we do not run around and shout into the world, "love me, love me, I need love", and then wait like the unhappy fisherman with his line in a poison stream, instead we give the thing we are looking for...and if the world has treated you badly, understand it is at the hands of those who have been treated badly, they are simply passing on their pain because they don't know any better, it is as impersonal as an earthquake or a hurricane...

calling out in pain into a deaf world (which is what you do) will only bring you sympathetic fools (such as myself)...that wall around your heart is yours to undo...this is such a well kept secret...how do i know this...