I like it better here

I dream in technicolour,
Standing between the green green grass
I look up at a rose painted sky.

This world shines bright,
Glistens like a blue sea
Reflected by the warm sun.

I’m surrounded by myself,
And I look happy
Happy to be home.

I dream in Technicolour,
So I close my eyes.

Feel the warmth kissing my cheeks,
Lulling me into its soft embrace.

I dream in Technicolor,
And I’ll never go back to black and white.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes i like it in my dreams better...because the life there is clearer, High Def.
and life when awake feels a bit out of focus...like watching an old old tv with a fuzzy picture and bad antenna.
quite a good piece here.
j.

[emipoemi]

You def aint in Kansas anymore here - lol

You might consider for the sake of universal understanding to say "tall green grass'. Not every reader is smart enough to realize that "tall grass" is the intention, much less take into account that the first line contains the word "dream" therefore anything can happen. But that I leave up to you to decide. What I did notice was that two of the three "technicolor"s are capitalized. Is that intentional or should the first be capitalized too? This is amazing as usual. Well done!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A very 'upbeat' and encouraging prose - in this monochrome world of our we need more positive writes to read - well done - loved your piece ... :-)

[CLR9]

And then a giant boot came (because you're small enough to be in between the grass) and it was like that scene in Antz when the shoe came with gum stuck to it, and then it squashed you and took you away. And then the owner came home, but didn't take his boots off, so your mangled corpse got stuck in the carpet. Then the dog pissed on it. And then the dude got no sex that night cause his wife got pissed. Who is the real victim here, eh?

[Emily]

Lol very creative buddy
Although I’d like to introduce you to something called “tall grass” where, coincidentally enough, is tall enough for you to stand in between ;)