I’ll sea you soon

i look at the ocean,
to remind myself of you.
it gives me comfort knowing
once the tide leaves,
it’s sure to return again.

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is so wonderful, full of feeling. nicely written and expressed

[SZHZIA]

Very short and meaningful piece of writing.

[emipoemi]

"For I'm pining - pining - pining-
Night and day I'm mining
In the tides of life for love!"
........................................From "Pining" by EDP.

This short piece simply reminded me of my own piece, that I couldn't resist singing it - lol. As good as it is, the power I felt it too short, but that's my problem, as there's nothing wrong with the poem at all as a whole. The brevity still exudes great power, and still paints a world of interpretation. I just wanted to wallow in the power a bit more while reading it. Well done! Much enjoyed (also liked the pun in the title - more to why I felt it so short)