The Slow Moving Water Will Kill Us All One Day

A volcano births

The stone that sits forever, 
Till rain beats it down.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

Nice imagery, especially in the first line. Good job :)

-QuanaWana

[Kasey Miriam]

this is an interesting Haiku. The first line doesnt really make any sense though

[Bluemerlin]

In a less redacted form:

A mighty volcano gives birth in an instant
To the stone that sits for an eternity,
Until the humble rain eats it away.

[Bluemerlin]

I hoping to imply the rest through the title