Wish I Was

Wish I was the breeze
Floating by
Gliding over land and sea
Free and easy
Seeing you there
I would kiss your face

Wish I was an Eagle
On warm golden air
An overlord of bronze
With all seeing eyes
I would swoop down
And take you to the clouds

Wish I was the ocean
With power all around
Ever fresh and surging
Forever at your shores
Trying to reach you and
Dying on your beaches

Reviews

[Laleetwin]

Be, you have created a visual, tangible representation of one human's longing for another. I love it's melancholy beauty.

[Nisreen]

This is quite a beautiful piece

[Leo]

Full of energy and grand imagination..resonated with me and lifted my spirits up..definitely captivating!

[Adesanya Yewande]

lovely poem,amazing choice of words...i love the picture it create in my mind...

[barleygirl]

This is a beautiful poem! I love the ways you chose things from nature & express them in words jam-packed with sensory imagery. I love the way this summons everything I feel when in nature (which I love to be) & how inspired I feel to write about my love of nature. Thanks for the gift that keeps on giving.

[Insight "MH"]

A magical writing! The way you put words together is like creating a masterful picture from thin air.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is really deep, and moving.
I love the way this was written, sounds so poetic, and really had such a strong meaning to it.
This was emotion filled, and romantic and sweet.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Keep writing :)

[Ana B.]

Love the second stanza, a beautiful sereene was wint wisps of longing...just a bit :)

[JayceeC]

This is beautiful imagery, all of which is connected to the power of nature, which creates a lovely picture of desire and worship at the feet or shores of that someone special.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I like it. It's very romantic.Thanks for sharing.