Wish I Was

Wish I was the breeze
Floating by
Gliding over land and sea
Free and easy
Seeing you there
I would kiss your face

Wish I was an Eagle
On warm golden air
An overlord of bronze
With all seeing eyes
I would swoop down
And take you to the clouds

Wish I was the ocean
With power all around
Ever fresh and surging
Forever at your shores
Trying to reach you and
Dying on your beaches

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

This is the first poem I have read from Leigh, and it is a good one. Balanced, well paced with an excellent structure , it impresses with a clear voice. Good work, read it!

[Onlyme]

Beautiful flowing effortless poem of unity and harmony, balance in all. Being at one with mother nature. Breathing, living and fulfillment of presence.

[Re-Pete]

our connection with nature is undeniable. this speaks to me of freedom, innocence and rising anonymously above withtout being tied to identity. so much can be gleaned from this free-flowing journey removed from the things of life that hold us down. i will have to read the multiple times. i love your analogies and anything to do with nature. there is a wonderful spiritual aspect. good stuff ... :)

[wordman]

makes you want to be free,mystical,

[BL]

And this is a good thing 😊

[R.E. Ray]

What I read here is "I wish I was anonymous." The narrator conveys a desire to observe and touch from a distance, to hide or conceal their identity, perhaps to avoid pain, perhaps to possess supernatural powers that give and impose love. A moving poem that leaves the reader wanting to know the narrator a little more. An excellent write.

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

Wish I was able to find this sooner. ;)

[thetish]

Ahh, yes, that is how it feels...

[Siddhartha Chatterjee]

Simple, effective, with a touch of romanticism.

[BESMASMILE]

A feel of a free spirit rendered in a poetic beauty!