A Rich Substance

A Rich Substance

A Poem by BL

Something beautiful happens
When life overflows
Like the chance meeting
Of duelling banjos

You play the guitar
Much better than me
On your lonely nights
While I ran free

Then love finally turns up
Unsteady on the nerves
A flowing rich substance
More than anyone deserves

© 2022 BL


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"more then anyone deserves"
the illusive illusion of the mythical orgasm
"when life overflows'
in its prime directive:
eat-survive-reproduce.
music is the food of love.
love is mother nature's trick
to get us to make babies.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Love is that rich substance that you found....especially when you meet someone unexpectedly . You never know what will happen. I like the dueling banjos as symbol of entwining together at last.
Well done.
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


oh that substance...the divine
sweetness and music I feel in your rhymes...

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is a very soothing poem..i would love to see the motivation behind it..but all in all, very awesome

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow this is very moving in its elegant simplicity. Makes me think of dreamy, warm Summer nights. Lovely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I had a warm feeling while reading this. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A good feeling poem that races along, well written!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Simply loved this flows to perfect each verse and great images are conjurned up inside my minds eye. Made me smile, feel good. And enjoyed to the max.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I loved the melody of the verses. The images are so vivid and lively. Great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


There's some hopefulness to this. Life is a gift no one really deserves, it's kind of what makes it so precious.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2015
Last Updated on January 19, 2022
Tags: Love, beauty, Life, Chance, Rich, substance, fortune, fate, affection, rapture, passion, luck

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BL
BL

London, United Kingdom



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