The Music Room

God knows we're all drawn to what's beautiful and broken. ~*~Magnus Bane~*~

~*~

You met me here,

Now stay,

And I will play for you,

I will play...

~*~

A song of sorrow,

A song of grace,

Lovely peaceful,

Melodic place.

A song of happiness and freedom,

Hey,

Stay with me,

Please stay in the music room.

~*~

A violin, guitar, a qin,

Resting in the corner.

Please,

Come in.

And I will play the piano for you,

Throughout the day.

I will play...

~*~

A song of distress,

A song of discord,

An unspoken prayer crying out at every unopened chord,

A demonic record.

A song of a dark and dreadful kingdom,

Hey,

Stay with me,

Please stay in the music room.

~*~

Because we all love things both beautiful,

And broken.

So take this music,

As a small token.

A peace of history,

A silent mystery.

A beautiful sunrise,

And the Sea's great demise.

And all the while I will be playing,

Playing for you...

~*~

A song of glory,

A song of triumph,

Strange and also gory.

Wicked and lovely,

A perfect harmony.

A song of death and immanent doom,

Happiness.

Hey,

Stay with me,

Please stay in the music room..

 

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Quite beautiful I did a love poem
about Music but just did a new one called
let me paint your beautiful mind
Then did one called Paint this canvas
of love and has a piano in it and did
another one called lets make musical
love.


been writing romance so much and this makes
me think of love and a music room is very peaceful.


Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.

Blessings. Kindred poet

[Bluefire]

Thank you muchly! ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet

[I Am Svetlana]

I always think music rooms are the most peaceful places. And the perfect places to meet anyone. It's a great place to get away, connect. Share interests, hobbies, talent even. One seems to discover themselves inside rooms like these...I always kind of see them as secret rooms, the rooms that people have heard of, but not everyone has been to. You know? I love music rooms! Great piece.

[Bluefire]

Aye, that's exactly how I feel about them sometimes they're full of life and others there's just a single soul.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^

[I Am Svetlana]

I also love the picture you decided to use! So beautiful...

[Bluefire]

Thank you, I like it too. ^^

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this poem. It reminded me of the times I played my trumpet. The piano is such a beautiful instrument. I love anything that has to do with music. The flow of this poem was beautiful. All the words that you have said fit together so perfectly as if we were dancing. Thank you for sharing this poem.

[Bluefire]

Thank you muchly! ^^

[Ciara]

Very lovely! It flows so well and it seems a bit magical in some way. I love your poem it reminds me of the feeling I get when someone wants to share their music with me. When someone wants to play me their music, it is like they are sharing who they are, a piece of themselves through the lovely melodies they bring to life. I am a musician and I have a high appreciation for all who play music or have a deep understanding of it. Music is my world. Your poem was spectacular! I absolutely loved it!

[Bluefire]

Thank you! ^^

[Brittany Zedalis]

Oh, this is so beautiful.

[Bluefire]

Thank you! ^^

[Vian]

I love the reoccurring 'please stay in the music room...' it is beautiful. The piece very thoroughly encompasses the power of music. The everything-ness of music!

[Bluefire]

Thank you, Vian! =3

[TheJordBaker]

I really like this piece. Flows so well and some great lines in there. Well done :)

[Bluefire]

Thank you ^^
But, I do see a few mistakes that bother me. I must fix them! :3

[.]

Wonderful poem! Especially because it was about music! It's great to know talents like you! 100/100

[Bluefire]

Thank you! ^^

[.]

Ur welcome! ^.^

[Chidoriflower]

Lovely, just lovely. So sweet. So very magical....(the Magnus Bane quote fit perfectly.) This is summed up in a perfect little package, the words dancing over each other!! I loved it.

[Bluefire]

Thank you very much! The quote is really what inspired me to write a piece like this. ^^

[Chidoriflower]

Awesome! I heard the movie was pretty good....You are very welcome, Bluefire!!!:D

[Bluefire]

I haven't seen it yet, I hope it's as great as the books :3

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

The Bluefire illumines now and... how is it that you have looked at my life and summarized it so succinctly and ... with such gruesome grace? This fair scribble, of hobbit hilt, should n'er be played w'out a kilt and pipes to lure the mourners in... to this room of memories playing their dark melodic din; for those that live upon the tip of whims dine enchanted by your skimming pen. ~ Anon.

[Bluefire]

Thank you so much for that amazing review ^^

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat]

Thank you for the Chopin Etudes in dark ink! ^_^

[Bluefire]

Your welcome ^^