The boy with the broken heart.

The boy with the broken heart.

A Poem by THEB.F.G
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a poem of desperation.

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This is a story about a boy,

Whose life is sucked of all its joy,

By a girl who stole his heart,

As if she planned it from the start,

Now listen up, Open your ears,

Hold back all your coming tears,

Here it is, about to start,

The story of the boy with the broken heart…..

 

Wherever I go, there you are

Close behind or from afar

I wonder what you truly see

When you truly look at me

I turn around and I see you

And from that moment I just knew

But surly this cannot be real

Can this be the way I feel?

 

I ask you out, I get rejected

I act like I’m unaffected

You broke my heart, Left it shattered

Because to you I never mattered

 

I need you now,

I think that’s clear

All I want is you right here

You caused this

Straight from the start

You’re the one who broke my heart

 

I want your love, you have mine

Only you can make life fine

I’m a lock, you’re my key

Save me from my misery

You act as if my loves a crime

All I want is you to be mine

But I don’t see why that can‘t be

I can’t see why you can’t love me

 

I ask again, and you say no

You tell me just to let you go

I say that’s fine, But that’s a lie

I don’t want to be another guy

 

I need you now,

I think that’s clear

All I want is you right here

You caused this

Straight from the start

You’re the one who broke my heart

© 2009 THEB.F.G


Author's Note

THEB.F.G
This is a poem of desperation. i actually gave this to a girl, a somewhat regrettable action. but it helped vent how i feel. i recommend it if your in a hard time.

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EMP
:O so goooood.

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's a pretty good reflection of how you felt. It could flow a little better with some word changes, but overall a good piece. Good Job

Posted 15 Years Ago



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