Him

When you miss someone so much you crave them.

I miss him.
I miss his smell and the way he looked.
I even miss his taste.
But not the way he taste on my lips as we share a kiss.
The way he taste as I bite into him.
His blood trickling down my chin gives me shivers of glee as I lick at his wound.
The sweet meat of his flesh dangling between my teeth gives me a high like no other.
I'm hungry for his body.
I crave his entrails.
I miss him.

Reviews

[Haseo]

you always have this need to make everything a horror scene, I love it to say the truth but I have one small one
you should have added "But" before "The way he taste as I bite into him" to keep the continuity from "Not the way he taste on my lips as we share a kiss."
just a tiny note that's all.

I love it again, it made me thirsty LOL

[Bluebird91]

I can't help it lol :) I'm so fascinated by horror. And that does make sense. Thank you!

[Wølfy]

I too am thirsty. 'Tis a good poem.

[Haseo]

don't go on then sucking the people you love cause you love them lol

[Wølfy]

I have a slave in my basement to suck on when need be xD haha

[Bluebird91]

Lmao!!!! Oh lord

[Wølfy]

Praise Rikyu!

[Larry John]

Woah... this is overflowing with emotion for me! And the imagery is spot on

[Larry John]

okay so I don't know what happened to my review but it cut off, sorry about that! I went on to say that the poem's structure is really good and it flows very smoothly. It's a little erotic and a little dark, but that's what makes it interesting! You're a very talented writer, keep up the good work!

[Bluebird91]

Thank you!

[Mifa]

Leave it to Blue to make a love poem seem so gory. Lol. Hey you.
Nice one though, as always. Puke-drenching and ingenious.

[Bluebird91]

Lol you know me. I have to throw in a little darkness. And hey to you too mifa. Sorry, I've been really busy with getting classes together and work.

[Mifa]

Lol. I understand. Hope you're well though.

[Bluebird91]

I am :) and you?

[Mifa]

Good and still expecting another gory tale from you.

[Bluebird91]

I'm on it lol

[Gray]

Spooky, scary, creepy and frightful. Like a good stake dinner that stays in your memory, you have different ingredients you miss. Quite well done.