The Five Senses of Life

Something encouraging

Life is like the five senses.
You can see the ability to rise above.
Hear the chant of encouragement.
Smell the need for greatness.
Taste the determination.
And finally, touch the feel of achievement

Reviews

[ranscan]

An interesting application of the five senses to a communication of a process of life. The work itself is strong and keeps a concise hold to the theme and flow of thought.
I do wonder though if the word "feel" diffuses the last line, perhaps a synonym or related terminology to the idea might compliment "touch" better?

[Wølfy]

Technically, you cannot smell greatness. It does not actually have a scent.

[Bluebird91]

I think it smells like pie? :D

[Wølfy]

Ha-ha xD You mean π. :)

[Bluebird91]

Sure! Why not xD

[Wølfy]

Well, technically 3.14159265359... etc, but yes. The Pi nerds love.

[Bluebird91]

Nerds are fun. I'm a book nerd that loves horror movies and Doctor tv shows. Anything to do with flesh xD

[Wølfy]

Flesh eating zombie. xD I am a game/anime/physics nerd. I hate doctor shows xD aside from Dr. House he was amazing.

[Bluebird91]

Omg I love Dr. house! He's snarky and witty!

[revalatia]

Encouraging stuff. And given the right attitude, completely true and attainable. This should be on a classroom poster. Thanks!

[Bluebird91]

Aww thank you!!!!!