Your pain

I feel your pain,

The tears you hide,

The smile you fake,

Whilst you die inside.

 

You can lie,

Say your okay,

Laugh along,

Pretend all day.

 

But deep inside your heart, I know,

You aren't happy or strong,

But your weakness you will never show,

You have been hiding it for so long.

 

I want you to understand always,

I am here for you,

I love you with all my heart my friend,

And when you go through the pains in life,

I'll go through them too.

Author's Note

A poem to my friends who are going through bad times :) enjoy! x

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beautiful poem. We need good friends to keep us strong and on the right road. I like the emotion and the desire of your words. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[A Risen Heroine.]

I can relate, I do the very same thing as your friend..
Sadly..
Nice write!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice and honest. A true friend does see past the mask. Good write.

[Bertie]

Concise and with a definite destination
A touching poem full of emotions that everyone can easily relate to
Well done :)

[Helpless]

your friend is lucky to have you in their lives! great poem!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

N'aww! This is adorable haha, I love how you've conjoined two totally different people as one, (but i only know this coz you told me from the chair beside me) :L great poem. Keep writing b***h! :) xxx

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

freaking love this ^.^ awesome poem, terrific describing the feelings, and a good friend to be there for others with the bad times :) absolutely loved this, i can't pick a line i love, i love 'em all

[Bryan Micheni]

really like the first stanza, and the flow. good write.

[TJ]

Hopefully this poem helps someone who is struggling with this

[£15 + A S**t BJ]

hope it's nothing too serious, good f*****g poem as well :)