Can we...

Can we dance in the darkness,

Act like there is no tomorrow,

Acomplish our wildest dreams,

Face no sorrow.

 

Shout at the top of our lungs,

To empty, sleeping streets,

Laugh all the time,

Until we can't barely breath.

 

Reminise old times,

Never say good-bye,

Talk about bad times,

Possibly cry.

 

We won't judge eachother,

Share secrets we were going to take to the grave,

Joke about things we've said,

Each and every day.

 

These are the times I want,

Filled of unconditional love,

Together living,

Holding eachothers hands,

This is how I love to live my  life,

And you don't need to understand.

Author's Note

Any reviews appreciated :) hope this is okay

Reviews

[Anjali]

Simply beautiful! It kinda reminds me of my poem ' the story' I loved it!

[Seshat Nidaba]

I simply adored this anthem of youth, highly entertaining and emotive. 98/

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This is my new favourite of yours my friend.

This is so beautiful, yes I agree with Maggielou

[Maggie]

It's what everybody wants; to be accepted for who they are.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is awesome!

[Linear]

Such a lovely poem, love can be a wonderful gift, if it's given to one who loves you in return :O)

[Sukriti Suki]

I think purposely you have omitted the space between ' eachother' on 2 occasions...I really liked this..true emotions expressed wonderfully.

[Jill Wallflower]

This is good :) and so well written