Every Breath

My heart has suddenly became heavy,

I don't understand the pain,

It is like a foreign object inside,

Piercing me at every breath.

 

I know why I feel like this,

It's all your fault,

Atleast I feel alive when I read those words,

When I hear your tainted voice,

Thank you for the pain.

 

It may be stupid to say,

Starting more mess is not needed,

But for the things you have done,

I would happily try,

And make you feel the pain,

Piercing you at every breath.

Author's Note

Random words, hope its alright :) x

Reviews

[SensuelDeMot]

Your words so well expressed the hurt, the pain.
Sometimes pain is a good thing, it reminds us we are still alive, there is hope. :)

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Great work sweety :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

its awesome! love your writing so far! you rock!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The pain is like nothing on earth

[Lauren Baby]

very good!! you clearly put a lot of thought and power into your poems!! :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

It's great!
Love the way you turn it round at the end, you're all like 'hell no biatch, take it back!'
:P Great write xx

[LoopyLoo]

This is very good well done. :-)