Loneliness

Loneliness

A Poem by BlueberryKisses

She stared,

Blinking,

The systematic motion was gone,

No use,

Like most other things,

She feels empty,

Black on the inside,

Like a summer flower in the depths of winter,

Dead,

Numb feelings were now normal,

To her,

Happiness was bitter,

It was not the taste she liked,

In her own mind,

Her own world didn't judge her,

Loneliness is key,

That key is her life.

© 2011 BlueberryKisses


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Loneliness is the key, that key is her life. Great poem my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really good. :-) You're quite a good little writter. :-) Keep up the good work. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really good!
Keep up the good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


very well written..happiness was bitter..I like your usage of words and the expression a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You used the flower analogy well, and I liked the split of sentences while leaving the commas at the end of every line.
Also, interesting ending lines..They summed up the poem well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is AMAZING,
I knew you could write but not this well :P well done Hannah xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

great expression of feeling, you rock!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

F*****g wow man!
Amazing poem with fantastic dark / gothic undertones
A very well written piece

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 30, 2011
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BlueberryKisses
BlueberryKisses

Darlington, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Hannah c: I'm 19 and have an amazing set of friends and a wonderful boyfriend and I like writing poems c: more..

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