Emptiness

It hurts everyday but I hide it
Apart from the tears that fall at night
Nothing Ive done it worth much
So I guess I'll never be right
Some days the pain in unbearable
I just wish it didn't hurt to feel
The emotions take over me
The emptiness is real
No one knows that it's happening
I guess I can fake a good smile
Now and again I'll break down in tears
Because they've been held back for a while.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I Would Hold back my tears many times
when I was younger in High school and when
it was time for me to cry I couldn't stop crying
it was because I held back my tears and it isn't
Healthy for the heart or body.


When I feel it tells me I still care for others
but when I can't feel love or love others
and that is Numbed it would surely kill me and
I would die of a broken heart.


For a long time I carried pain inside from being
hurt from past Events with my father I won't speak
of he struggled with addictions and after I grew up
the pain healed but time heals all wounds but writing and crying
watching funny movies hanging out with friends helped.


God Created us to love and feel it can hurt
sometimes not always and other times it can
I hope that your struggles and pain heals we always
learn from them no matter how difficult they are
don't allow them to Define you your pain problems
and Struggles we all struggle with something.

and we can Rise above that struggle or pain.

What doesn't kill us makes us stronger. even when
I am hurting I keep going and what I can't handle I
give to Jesus but carrying it makes it more and more
painful so I learned as I grew up and became an Adult.


I hope that you will be well and find
what you're looking for in life, Life is a very Precious thing.

So much Raw Emotion here nice work.


"The emotions take over me
The emptiness is real
No one knows that it's happening
I guess I can fake a good smile "


Thank you for sharing this Emotional piece.

Blessings. Kindred poet

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Oi you. smile. but well done on the amazing poem :3 xx

[Sami Khalil]

"The emotions take over me
The emptiness is real
No one knows that it's happening
I guess I can fake a good smile "

A very expressive poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Sophles]

you shoud express your feelings more

[BlueberryKisses]

I don't really like to tell people my problems :I

[Sophles]

I understand, this poem sort of hit me with a brick because ive always thought of you as someone who is always happy and i guess that made me overlook things, and im sorry about that , i feel like a s**t friend, and if you ever need to talk i will be here i promise :)

[BlueberryKisses]

I normally am happy, just things got too much at one point :I but you're not a s**t friend! And awwh thank you, same to you Sophie :)

[Eddie Phillips]

There is no pain like hidden pain. it can eat at the inside of you and wither at the soul. Your writing can be used as a alleviate some of the pain. I always believed that you have your gift to help others but to also help yourself. You touched me and many others with this poem because we all have been through similar pain and emptiness. Things will get better. Keep writing your heart and letting people share your gift. You will see that people can relate and you will not feel alone. Then that emptiness will be filled with companionship and resolution to make it through. Thanks for sharing this poem.

[BlueberryKisses]

Thank you for such a lovely review :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

I can honestly relate. It seems like sometimes we need to feel these moments as unpleasant as they are. From my own experiences of feeling this low and being there like you, I have discovered that when we fall so far down and we hit the bottom the only place we have left to go is up. The pain and the emptiness are very real and so many people look at age and tell us we are too young too feel this way and we only do it for attention. Everyone has feelings no matter the age. We can be broken and shattered at any point in our lives. You poem is lovely and has touched and moved me. I hope that one day soon you find your true smile.

[BlueberryKisses]

Thank you :) I agree with what you said about ' the only place we have left to go is up', I'm glad you liked my poem :)

[highthought]

u re not giving a slight bit of hope ....why ?

[BlueberryKisses]

Because that's not the point/message behind the poem

[highthought]

what is life without hope ?

[BlueberryKisses]

I don't know

[highthought]

writer >> is he to fill lines or to give ideas ?

[unexpectedsparkle]

It's good-expressed more emotion than holding a strict poetry rule or whatever, and I think that's awesome.(: