Fix Me

Teardrops fall and pool on the keys,

Of my battered computer keyboard,

My vision blurred,

And a pounding in my head,

From the resounding echoes,

Of the hateful things we said,

I pound my fist upon my desk,

Till blood glides down my hand,

I stare at the blood,

Longing to understand,

Tears are falling faster,

I cannot stop them anymore,

The strings holding together my sanity,

Are falling to the floor,

My strength has all but left me,

I am a weak and broken man...

Come and get me if you will..

And fix me if you can.

Author's Note

eh..its one of those kind of nights..

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed it was, a meriment of divulged and personifcation of though process, well done, good read.

[Leave me alone....]

wow, amazing...really great write

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You do amazing dark writes...amazing!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

oh man, this is really good. I can feel the ache...the anguish.. i can relate to the sadness.. I love this poem. It has that darkness and has that loss of hope and everything is just going wrong. Fantastic write!! =) I love it. It's so full of emotions.

[Coyote Poetry]

I could feel the pain and sadness in the poem. Easy to fall apart. Hard to find a repair sometime. Strong sentences gave life and emotion to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

full of emotion...it has that dark sadness to it that makes you feel all of the pain...it makes you realize that your not the only one that needs help and everyone has been there...make it through and amazing job

[White Ink]

Strong intense emotions.. well penned.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I HEAR YOU .. WE HAVE ALL BEEN "THERE" .. REST AND DREAM OF LOVELY THINGS .. BATTLE CAN WAIT TILL DAWN ..

... JASMINE

[Mika Haruna]

I love this, a dark peice tht flows nicsly... well donee