A broken promise

A broken promise

A Poem by Blue Rose

A promise is something that you mean

with all your heart and not something you say

just to convince someone you've changed.

Every single day I saw you break that promise and to my own pride

I belived you all again. I look in the mirror and what do i see...

a girl who goes through hell each day that she lives

even the thoght just makes her cry.

The promise you broke hurt me enough

I'll never belive you again.

 

© 2009 Blue Rose


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All we have is our word in the end. If our promises are worthless. We are not worth too much. You are lucky if you caught a liar. A powerful poem. A pleasure to read.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 8, 2009

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