Dedicated

Made for a great friend of mine

I'm not as i used to be

'Cause you made me change

Me myself and i are not the one i know

Find my way through love

United in tales of sorrow and hatred

Can't control the thoughts

Kill my mind as it is now

Endore me for what i was

Don't think you can change me back

Such things as your trust

Or faith in me are not things i can get back

Right?

Rain are the final thing to complete my sorrow

You are still my best friend..

All i want is you to forgive me

Because i want you as my friend always

Or until we die at least

United as one to defeat an enemy

That sounded stupid i know

Though you haven't forgot

Hatred is still in your mind i know

Am i right?

Think i'm done now.. C'ya

Written: April 2.th 2011

Dedication: The person would know

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Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is Awesome. I really like it!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Honestly, I feel you've worked your wording exactly. Painful and sweet, like the poetry of Shelly or Behan. a clear imagery of shocking absolutism and a no-ire remediableness. Easy flow and time, good read. Well done.