Undead Heart

Another heart breaking piece....

Lonely soul, shriveled heart
Hunger for refreshing love ripping me apart
No fresh scent, no sweet taste
To make my cringing hunger haste

I've had it crushed and chewed
Scarred and skewed
Beaten and Bruised
And unmercifully used

The keeper lashes and locks me
Demons laugh and mock me

Red rain spews from not the skies,
But down from my depressing eyes
Misery will multiply
It will help me die
No matter how much I try
My fierce fate will fortify

Reviews

[Julie]

This is awesome. Such a lot of emotion. This is one of my favorite poems I've read all today! Keep it up!