Cake!

A flirty, humorous poetic piece, metaphorically portrayed through sweet treats

This girl, she gives more love than I can take

Love to wake up every morning with her like pancakes

She's a very rare one, all bakers can't make

This one's heaven sent so I guess I'll call her Angel Cake

Or babycakes, because shes my baby, so nice and sweet

Or cupcake, because shes just right for me

Shes an all type cake, right flavor at the right time

Funnel cake at the fair, cheese cake at night time

 

Babygirl, you look so tasty

You never fail to amaze me

Youve got the sweetest kisses baby

I get a sugar rush of love, goin' crazy

 

Youre the only cake I want, the only one I adore

The other flavors are nasty and not as good as yours

Carrot Cake isnt sweet enough, thinking id get too flabby

Cant stand crab cakes because theyre just crabby

You're the best, my sweet one, the best all around cake

You're a special one, not just a plain pound cake

Author's Note

Warrant's "Cherry Pie" kinda influenced this piece. Unlike the song however, this isnt meant to be sexually metaphoric.

Reviews

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

thats really creative ive never heard of someone doing that befor.
ur writing is excellent. you make it seem like it should never be a bore.
your doin really good. you aint makin it fake.
excellent job on ur poem cake1
it was great!
yah that was my epic fail at rapping! lol! fantastic poem!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Well, maybe she could be your surprise cake..Good one enjoyed reading..Sunflower

[JenLyn]

cute and humorous and inventive. Good job keep it up! :)

[Holly O'Brien]

lol this one definitely has some humor wrapped into it, but moreover the speaker's fascination with the subject (girl) is well expressed...good job

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was cute and funny. Thanks for sharing. :)

[S.W.]

Great to read. Well done

[Ruth]

Great structure! Love it, very surreal! xx

[MissWordSmith]

aww!!
i loved the last stanza soooo much!
advice: re read to check for grammar errors in the beginning of the poem.

a very sweet piece though! really made me think ''awww'''

[melissa]

very cute i liked it alot!:)

[TransparentHearts]

Aww that is adorable and catchy too!