A prayer

A prayer

A Poem by BlueHiraeth
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Its a poem, about a plea we all sometimes say.

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A Prayer
I gaze upon the starry sky.
Where are you my angel?
Fly over and shield me.
why can't I breath?
I am cocooned in my sorrows.
Darkness conquers my soul.
Fear incarcerates the heart.
I am losing control.
I maunder with my scorched credence.
Doubt and loss dominates me.
Mystified in this ceaseless delirium,
I hallucinate my euphoric history.
Was I in a fool's paradise?
Stargazing a pipe dream?
As I stand on the edge of memory lane
I'm abashed to love once more,
Fate massacred my dreams,
So I slay my happiness.
In agony I call out to you.
Wake me from my nightmare.
Relive me from melancholia.
Grace me with your scythe.
Reap me to oblivion, oh dark one
Cast over me your iridescent glow
You are my salvation.
Take me to your empyreal
Deliver me from this creation

© 2016 BlueHiraeth


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BlueHiraeth
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A beautiful poem about loss and the emptiness it leaves. At least that's my interpretation. In any event, I loved it. Well done. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


BlueHiraeth

8 Years Ago

Thank you fellow writer
Your soul searches so deeply, within and within the stars, aching for the way home. So beautifully bittersweet. I have known such nightmares, and such dreams that kept me alive in the waiting.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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BlueHiraeth

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the lovely words. means alot
I love the lines
"darkness conquers my soul, fear incarcerates the heart"

I don't usually like poetry compared to excerpts and stories but this is beautiful.
xxx

Posted 8 Years Ago


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BlueHiraeth

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review :-D

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Added on August 23, 2016
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