Hiding

The night was dead but we’re so alive   
we lived the night full of sweet bliss   
but the lights were there to catch us alive   
to cage us from the freedom we possess 

Once we’re known, they’ll all thirst   
for they love talking about the story of us   
we should hide, since our lives were cursed   
from the eyes of the people around us
 
We ran like animals from hunters   
for our lives that they want to devour   
hunters, oh they know no manners   
they only care for their so called power 

We know places to hide from the light   
as we see the light from the window pane   
and we loved each other ‘til the morning light   
over again until we’re all insane

Reviews

[christina sherin]

very impressive poem.i love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful journey in the poetry. I liked the feel of joy and happiness in the poem. A perfect ending to the amazing poetry Christian.
Coyote

[Nora]

Yeah i love it , it's amazing poem with accelerated actions, it completely made me feel like if i were with those 2 lovers in the same events , keep going Christian 😊😊

[CMC]

I thought the poem was excellently done. The message is bold; it gives two lovers something they can live for, each other. Then the eyes of people who want to take that away from them stare them down. Well-done!

[Anjali]

Very lovely poem, Christian. I could imagine two lovers who wanted to be alive but were cursed from the eyes of the people around them. The last stanza is beautiful.
Regards,
Anjali

[wordman]

hiding from the gossipers ,living life to the fullest