Our Love

I was in the middle of rush

Then you came without talking

I was entertained with fuss

Now you come with the talking

 

The feeling is surreal and deceiving

I got no regrets but you’re concealing

You were afraid thought I’ll be leaving

But then again I talked with the talking

 

You showed me the things I want

I showed you yours

There I seed and plant

It grew beautifully with thorns

You said that night "I love you"

I believed and said I do too

This love we love is only but a few

But I love this love and so do you

 

You stayed and really believed

And thought it was inspiring

I was always a fool but never deceived

Now you’re with me never forget it has no ending

Our love was tested by time and space

And people who talked but we didn't care

"I Love You" I said and touched your face

Just stay with me, it's my life's prayer

Reviews

[wordman]

a beautiful poem of love,i enjyed

[XO Vee]

"i Love you" i said and touched your face
just stay with me, its my life's prayer

My favorite part; I love the whole poem but this piece really emphasizes what you're trying to say no matter what that love it there. And relations like that are meant to be kept and nurtured like GOLD!

[Christian Bonoan]

Thanks for this review! I appreciate this so much