Free

At first "click" says the demon inside
At second, fire burning from within
My body shakes, and my red blood cried
And I smiled as my heart felt something

Our first touch seemed wrong but felt so wild
One look, one stare, as I feel you heat
You say things, foolish things like a child
And the sky smiled, with you I'm complete

Now I see everything just so right
Like the rain pouring in little streets
There we meet like a child in the night
Stars falling as we kiss, my heart beats

The air brought me to a place with you
Only you as the ending began
Sparkling, as you say "I love you too"
I blushed and hugged you as I'm all done

Just let me in your arms 'til I'm done
Done loving you with all that I am
Staying here's hard like the shining sun
Now tell me I'm worth it just like them

Your whisper on my neck feels so good
Your clothes are all over my room
Tempting, but I don't know if I should
It's hard to think but the flower's bloom

The moon and stars are singing with me
As the stars shoot me across my heart
Then the sun shines, I now clearly see
The space you left where we made art

Wond'ring if you know what I thought of
Red feelings all over my ceiling
Eating my bones through my skin so soft
As I was wrecked by this red feeling

I guess the flower's all you needed
Mixed colors washed your feelings away
So cold, as if I was born to be dead
Now you're gone, I'm gone, I'm so afraid

I find myself now in a forest
Bare feet walking with the pain inside
Then the rain came as I lost the best
I screamed so loud 'til the trees all hide

Morning came, I sighed and all was clear
I opened my eyes and clearly see
My reflection smiling from my fear
As the sun rise, I smiled and felt free.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting journey in the poem. Many demons to be fought in a long life. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to positive ending. Thank you Christian for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Hanah Gotski]

This is AMAZING! One of the best poems I have come across on this site

[Jenny Leigh]

Great work. Much more rhythmic and even flowing than the others I have read before. Over all very nice.

[M.A.]

This is an amazing piece. I felt every emotion love, passion, fear, hopelessness. Well done!

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank You for this review :) I appreciate this so much :) You're so kind :)

[AUU]

I'm stuck wondering what the "click' was.

Great little piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Christian Bonoan]

For me that "click" is something that they call "spark"
that spark you feel when you're falling for someone.

Thanks for this review :)

[Chris]

It feels that English is a second language - and if true, you've a good understanding of usage and speaking.

I felt the being drawn toward a person and their acceptance and then dismissal... and as at the end of the piece you let go.

[Christian Bonoan]

Yup! English is my second language, I live in the Philippines :) Thank you :)

You got my feelings! :) thanks Chris :)