The Stars That I Look At

Walking pencils and dancing minds

That’s what I see always in you

Your wit kills and your heart inspires

We’re clays waiting to be mold by you

 

Your talents and all inspires all

You made me feel that I am existing

Like the moon exists in the daylight

And stars that shine in my ceiling

 

You helped me find my way to things

And all the ways I’ll walk through soon

You touched my life like a mother did to me

Thank you for all, as you’re the star in the sky.

Reviews

[Neal S]

Lovely work. Very touching and heartfelt. I liked this very much!

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank You for this review :)

[Jade]

really loved that opening stanza, this is some wonderful write here.