Stars

Were friends and everything we want to be

I’m so glad that it ended up so deep

Talking at night, stars shine for me to see

All the pretty words that you said to me

 

Days passed as your became mine and loved me

I’ve become yours and my heart fond so fast

Your heart is so gold and as mild as the sea

And my eyes so clear as the stars so last

 

The stars above so high smiled in the night

Like you in my dreams but now you’re with me

A star falling from the sky is so bright

Now the stars fell, you're now with me

 

I love you to the moon and back I say

As you believed and kissed me quietly

The birds sang their songs and we sleep and stay

Now were asleep with the gold heart wildly

 

I reached the stars above though they’re so high

As you’re mine, I blushed and this love is ours

Water fall from the sky as then I sighed

With you I’m complete like the sky and stars.

Author's Note

Sorry for some errors and unclear lines :)

Reviews

[Neal S]

I really enjoy how this kind of flows between "everyday talk" and a poetic language. Its nice.

[Christian Bonoan]

Thanks Neal! you're so nice, I appreciate this so much :)

[Jade]

amazing! or shall I say very awesome, I can feel this write. very lovely