Lies

It was the end of the day

But the start of a new life

Then I fell and your eyes stayed

And our lips touched like a knife

 

My mouth is wet by your love

And my life is worth each day

You showed me the things above

And all the worst things I say

 

I fly with you till the dawn

And fall without you with me

I cried and lied till the dawn

Cotton candy is so free

 

As free as the lovers there

Sorrow as the likes of me

Sweet as the disturbing fair

Above the sky so I see

 

Small talk everyday with this

Little lies filled my days with you

You lied and lied as I’m pissed

Now I’m full with skies of blue

 

I’m sure there was fire in us

Though I was never enough

I lost the one I can trust

But now I’ve just had enough

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

If you catch a liar. You were lucky.
"I’m sure there was fire in us
Though I was never enough
I lost the one I can trust
But now I’ve just had enough"
We know when the end is near. Better to run than hope for a miracle that can't happen. Thank you Christian for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank you for saying that it is an excellent poem :) I appreciate it so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was a worthwhile read. Poetry should teach. This poem gave a lesson and you are welcome.

[AUU]

The transition of in-love to falling out of love is a sharp one described here.

A few stand outs to me were:

"And our lips touched like a knife." That's some steamy imagery there.

followed by the next.

"My mouth is we by your love." Again. Very hot and heavy.

Then by the ends it's cold.

[Christian Bonoan]

Thanks!!! that is what I really want to express in here :) thanks for this review :)