Would you?

If I hugged you,
would you never let go?

If I kissed you,
would you cherish that moment?

If I reached for your hand,
would you take mine gently?

If I needed a shoulder,
would you let me cry on yours?

If I needed to talk,
would you really listen?

If I needed to scream,
would you do it with me?

If I needed to go,
would you come with me?

If I fell for you,
would you catch me?
or just let me hit the pavement?

Author's Note

grammar?

Reviews

[Crusaderscross]

Loved the ending. Could not have put it better...good write

[Antonio Valentino]

Lots of great questions, strung together very nicely.

Nice twist at the end.
Antonio :)

[melissa]

i love the ending. great poem all together:)

[Knoxxeh]

I like it

[Arianna]

i love the end