Keep it broken

Keep it broken

A Poem by Blue tailed kite

Smiling faces

come and go

 

My heart still wavers

to and fro

 

Thats a sign 

its still alive

 

Still can feel love

Still can die

 

So I've decided

to keep it broken

 

The walls of my heart

may never open

 

I'm scared if I heal

And let it open

 

Iam gonna fall

and be heart-broken.

 

So im gonna keep,

Keep it broken

 

Smiling through the

Streets untrodden.

© 2009 Blue tailed kite


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This is very nice. I can relate to this poem in every way. Though I have been heartbroken before. Now I'm not going to let my heart be anyones because I don't want that to happen. I think this is good. I love the rhyme scheme within the poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This sounds very much like a song to me. I know just how this feels; "You can't break my heart; my hearts already been broken so why fix it just to be broken again? that is, even if I knew how to fix it.
Nice job putting this together in poetic form.

Posted 14 Years Ago


absolutely beautiful blue tailed kite u r my inspiration

Posted 14 Years Ago


A nice poem with a sensitive touch hearts need to heal and then be strong for the next time love might come along,your deft words were truly inspiring as was the flow of your intensitivity here well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this.. Its like a resolute conclusion to accepting the situation for what it is.. even if it doesnt mean death in itself. I love the despondency included..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this... It really means something to me.. Kinda like I'm too scared to open myself up for anyone anymore... Because I feel if I do... I'll only get hurt. Nice one! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 15, 2009

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Blue tailed kite
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I am a grad student who tries to do other random stuff in between running experiments in the lab. Apart from writing I also like to sketch, paint, play my guitar and synth and watch anime. more..

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