Water

Sparkling, cascading water

Held by an expensive hand

Fancy lights

Two pair of urchin eyes

Peep through the glass

Longinly.

Sparkling, cascading water

Drops.

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A cool idea of using water soon people will be clambering for this precious commodity never mind oil water is going to be the most expensive commodity on the planet well at least the drinking variety.
You wouldn't believe how many gallons of water it takes just to make a few clothe items and other things in industry,nicely penned though i have never heard of the expression expensive hands that was rather an amusing comment.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I agree with Dani I do get the impression of being underwater as well. I liked it. Also I agree with Eileen McGuinness because water does get wasted. I have learned in my ecology class about water conservation. Well good job. I don't want to bore you with the details of my class. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Dani]

I love this. It gives me the impression of being underwater, with a glass sheet above me. This is a brilliant poem.

[Sonya]

This is great way to describe water. And how precious it is. Kuos to you. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Water is precious in part of the USA already. California and Texas must use the ocean. The cost is very high to take away the salt. I like the feel and description in your poem. Water will be a value item very soon.
Coyote

[nunldon]

Cool; sounds like a snow globe.
very fun.

[Undying Glory]

nice poem. i like the one word lines, they're really impactful. i think this poem is quite beautiful. good job