Cure

Moonlight streaming

a shiny silvery metal

blood-stained

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good job. Very powerful. I can understand that a lot of people kill themselves and cut themselves...I have had a friend that had committed suicide...I loved this regardless. Thanks for sharing. :)

[nunldon]

Very succinct blue; powerful

[Tina Kline]

Nice. Creates the instant image of someone trying to suicide or who has just cut themselves. Both, I know, can be seen as a cure for all sorts of hurt and pain.

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Is this the start of something or just a little experimentation liked it.

[Poeticpiers]

powerful terse verse conjures up instant mental images but not a Haiku