Sunny days

Sunny days

A Poem by Blue tailed kite
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Just wrote it this morn :)

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I opened my eyes, and look out yonder

And what I see, fills me with wonder

 

Sunlight streams, through my window

Filtering through, warming my soul oh.

 

Sunny days, sunny days

Makes me wanna, laugh away

 

Though sooner or later, night will befall

Till then let me warm up, soak it up all.

© 2009 Blue tailed kite


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I love it. It is very happy like the review said below me. Which is good. I don't see happy all of the time. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem! Optimistic and happy, but with a touch of impending gloom with the night thing. Kudos! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this poem!! I could see everything you just explained, in my mind. And it also seems like there is some sort of inner message that is hidden by what the words say!! This was a really good poem!! (Thanks for reading and reviewing "The Inner Devil")

Posted 15 Years Ago


Optimistic are you not? :) Lovely poem. Spreads positive vibes! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice happy poem; I liked it (smile)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Brought a smile to my face! I love the positivity of this piece. Short and very sweet as well. Great poem! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on December 13, 2009

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Blue tailed kite
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I am a grad student who tries to do other random stuff in between running experiments in the lab. Apart from writing I also like to sketch, paint, play my guitar and synth and watch anime. more..

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