Walking in the rain

Walking in the rain

A Poem by Blue tailed kite


I love to walk, walk in the rain
Beneath the dripping trees, on the wet terrain
Hiding my tears and drowning my pain,
I tell myself again and again;
Life is in living, not in loss or gain,
Live not in regret or with a stain;
But bind the hearts around you, in a loving chain....

© 2009 Blue tailed kite


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I liked this because walking in the rain is good for me. I can relate pretty much. I cry a lot and no one can see my crying if it's raining. No one will be able to tell because well you know it's already raining. A lot of girls in music videos use rain to make it seem like they are crying. It doesn't really show any emotion because it is all fake. I think this is good. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


You're so very right. Life is not about the materialistic...rather it's about us, about you and I. It's too bad we sometimes forget that along the way. When we do though we have you and walking in the rain. Perfect.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Fantastic! I love positive notes.
You explored a lot of territory here
with such economy; very bright!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 12, 2009

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Blue tailed kite
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I am a grad student who tries to do other random stuff in between running experiments in the lab. Apart from writing I also like to sketch, paint, play my guitar and synth and watch anime. more..

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