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This was a beautiful poem! God is the creator of the heavens and earth. I enjoy nothing better than reading Genesis, it's so fascinating all about how made the earth. It's amazing isn't it. All the different animals, each individual person, God made all of those.
A little mistake...
God is are creator of all- You need to take out the "are". And "the". Just because it doesn't quite make sense.
So it will look like this.....
God is the creator of all!
Hopefully that made sense to you.
A great write, you're very good at poetry. And nothing better than writing poetry praising God!
100/100
This was a beautiful poem! God is the creator of the heavens and earth. I enjoy nothing better than reading Genesis, it's so fascinating all about how made the earth. It's amazing isn't it. All the different animals, each individual person, God made all of those.
A little mistake...
God is are creator of all- You need to take out the "are". And "the". Just because it doesn't quite make sense.
So it will look like this.....
God is the creator of all!
Hopefully that made sense to you.
A great write, you're very good at poetry. And nothing better than writing poetry praising God!
100/100
Name: Tara
Age: 12
Love: Jesus, family, friends, movies, food, seasons and my home.
I am also a firm believer in Christ. He saved me from my sins. :)
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