Wonder

           Looking up at the sky 

           So very high 

           

           Looking at the ground

   So very profound

               

           Looking all around 

           It's all so sound

             

           Wondering if people know 

   God made it so

   

                                   

                                           

       

               

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

First, it makes you look around, even if in a room full of books and what not. : ) Second, it allows the reader to find you feeling your own poem in the depth it was meant to be understood!! Nice job with painting an emotional poem in with a heart's view of what remains important in your OWN life. Beautiful Blue Eyes. xoxo -Mark

[Midori]

Vary true and well put. I have noticed that you are not afraid to put your beliefs in your writing and i have a lot of respect for people who can do that.

[Lively]

True and lovely poem with deep meaning. Keep it up.

[Ichthus Reality]

Absolutely agreed :D

Nicely written! A simple poem, but you really had my attention! I often feel this way when I look around. I cannot believe the beauty God has given us! It truly does my heart good!
A wonderful write!

[~Lizzy♬]

This is such a great poem. It's simple, but also it has so many words. :)

~Lizzard~

[Desert Dreamer]

A simple poem that expresses just how much there is to see in the world, it is good to observe the world.