WE CLICK

WE CLICK

A Poem by Maureen Mwaniki
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Click…click…

The click of her heels

Click…click…

It speaks to me


Click…click…

Carrying her Dior bags

Reeking of chanelle

Am decent in my rags

But she’d prefer YSL


Click…click…

They say she’s stuck up

I tell them to shut up

I can’t match her glamour

But she knows that I want her


Click…click…

Hear that click of her heels?

Click…click…

It tells me we click


© 2011 Maureen Mwaniki


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It tells me we click

Posted 13 Years Ago


It clicks in my minde, I see a picture. It works very well! Good catch!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This speaks to me with all the lovely thin italian fashionistas in stilletos here. They speak to me. I feel dressed in rags next to them, the american that I am. You are able to tell such a full story with so few words I envy you that

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that last line was magnificent! love this one...as usual, economic on the words but generous with the message...i love the diction. great job, you really are talented!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A interesting poem. You create a vision of a woman with a purpose. I like the ending. I like woman with good taste. Sometime we must do what we must to sacrifice to buy what we need. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow I LOVE IT!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Maureen Mwaniki
Maureen Mwaniki

Nairobi, Kenya



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