the I

the I

A Poem by Blu Maximo

Take away the ‘me’ the ‘you’

The ‘us’

It is I. And I remain.

Stilled and stirred.

Breathtakingly beautiful for I am the light

In the coast

Singing of love

Singing of truth

Singing of freedom

It is I

Who you kill

It is I

Who you save

It is I

Who you live

You are the I

In the darkness you traverse

You are your own light.

 

 


© 2018 Blu Maximo


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Love this, this is very well written and creative, powerful as well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Your last line says it all. A powerful message in a few simple words and lines. You convey so well hope, strength, and resilience in this poem. Such an uplifting message we don't see often enough in the Cafe. Nice work!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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A Poem by Blu Maximo