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I wrote this having one expression, but people found many different meanings. I wonder what it means to you.

heat love passion
feelings evoked by you
your slow speed
approaches rubicund to me

calm wet frozen
is how you make me feel
rapidly
coming your cerulean beams

new lush forward
welling up deep inside
so briskly
your viridian stream shimmers

Author's Note

Constructive criticism always welcome. No flames. What it meant to you always helps.

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[Juan]

I dont have an extensive vocabulary nor am I an expert at summarizing ones poetry but your words painted a slide of colorful pictures in my head (no pun intended) lol I read this poem and it seemed to take me through the seasons with a smile.Very wonderfully written, thanks for sharing and the smile :)